" ... nor could her eyes which were large and accustomed to the dark the way all deep sea creatures were."
"... Underneath whirled a mass of colors. " ( Chapter 1 )
I imagine Lysanna more like a human than an alien, " ... inhabiting a human body " like her sister. But the body, the skin, slowly fades and leaves the colours back.
Thx for the constructive suggestions. It was intended to draw the eyes extremly sharper than the rest, because it's a new way to create art for me to play with focus. As you can see on my other pictures i like intense coulours, the over-the-top-comic-feeling, so the logic step now is a extreme comic focus . The photorealistic style like the Maya Portrait was not my aspiration this time.
I love the eyes!!! ...unfortunately the rest of the piece feels unfinished. If you decided to leave the edges less defined I would've also liked to see the colors fade away as it moved towards the edges.